All Comments on 'Silent Singer'

Interesting debut. I assume it's only the first chapter. Better editing needed, but it pulled me in.

Five, for starters.

About finding out more about Missy and what she's going through thats making her cut herself. I'm very interested in this and i hope chapter 2 will be up soon.

Horrible Story, why write something sooooo sad.

I'm sorry for the errors. This is my 1st story ever. I just wanted to write something different and a bit realistic. Hopefully i'll find an editor soon to make reading my story more enjoyable. And thank you for your comments! :)

It made no sense. Not a romance story at all. Maybe your next story will be better?

write what you want and develope a following and 99% of the time you can forget complaints from people that have never written anything. of course those that say how wonderful you are should be considered the best and brightest even if they have not written anything. develope a thick skin. not everyone liked dickens, hg wells, bronte, etc.

Will this story have more chapters? I don't want form an opinion of your story off an assumption.

Yes their will be more chapters. Chapter to was submitted tonight. Thanks for reading.

Your story is haunting, just as it is unexpected. I did not think I would stumble across something of this caliber here.

Some of us know exactly what that room looks like, it's perimeters, the prison of it. We have been Missy. That's what makes your story good: it sings to the part in us that wants to give up and is weary of life. I suggest that you keep writing and editing, but your strength is emotive tone. Stay with that and you will do well for yourself.

haunting and original... excited to see where this goes

Looking forward to reading more.

I've been there and know what it's like to feel that gut wrenching sadness of despair, when death is the only solution. The searing pain, the feeling of emptiness, the cry for help, the tears dripping off ones chin, yes, most people have no idea what it's like not to be loved. "SadDreamer" your tale should bring out compassion for a lonely sole, but will they really understand. Thanks.

I really felt that