All Comments on 'Silver Hearts Join As One'

by horsechick91

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Irish_LassIrish_Lassover 12 years ago
Very Nice

Part of it reminded me of "Eragon" By Christofer Paloini

But it soon broke away from that. I liked it my only thing is I wish that it was longer and had more detail of both plot and sex.

PornguinPornguinover 12 years ago
Agreed

I agree with Irish Lass. I liked the lead up, but the intercourse was too WHAM BAM Thank you Ma'am.

bearmad1963bearmad1963over 12 years ago
Loved It.

I loved reading your story and wish you would write another chapter about Kate and her dragon.

Will keep reading your stories as you post them.

horsechick91horsechick91over 12 years agoAuthor
@ Bearmad

Uh, Bearmad, my charaters name is Elana, not kate. where did that name come from?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

it says that Kate slides a door closed.

horsechick91horsechick91over 12 years agoAuthor
Ack!

Thank you for finding that typo. most of my main female charaters end up with the name Kate when i am writting, and i change it from there. apparently i missed one.

Rdoolz51Rdoolz51over 11 years ago
Awesome!

One of the best stories I've read sicne the Inheritence Cycle! Keep writing xD..By the way..this is Ryan :P

darciathedarklorddarciathedarklordabout 11 years ago
wonderfull

very nice story i enjoyed reading it and i shall now be sure to read more

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