All Comments on 'Silver Lining'

Well written with a credible story line.

Nice One... loved it.. felt da emotion of both the characters and a credible story line..

gary

for crying out loud get a proof reader or at least have a read-through before posting! M222RJR.

Loved the story and the sex wasn't bad either. I know it's a little late to say this, and that it's been said before, but there way too many typos and errors in the story telling. Nothing life altering but they are more like pot holes in the road that have to be navigated around and slow the flow a little. I hope you get an editor or do better proof reading in your other stories.

Thanks for posting and like I said, I loved the story.

This is a romance story that is good when it could be great with some editing. A good proof-read of the text would help, and the story as a romance would be better if the the main character and Haley were merely steadies rather than already married. The romance scenes and fine, but too brief in length.