All Comments on 'Simon Pendleton Ch. 04'

Great story hope we don't have to wait that long for the next chapter.

Good story. Only found one minor error, to wit: With 4 years of judo or some other form of combat art, more than one knee should have been destroyed. Jodi having taken one out left three. After 2 head butts to the nasal passage, a palm fist to the nose should have pushed bone fragments into the brain. One down permanently. However, still an outstanding read. Still 5 stars.