by gypsygrrl
I think girls can write good gay sex stories. I liked this one. It had a pretty cool twist (I'm into M/m), on an old theme. I hope you write more stories like this.
Well-crafted, literate prose is rare and appreciated. And I don't understand why "chicks" shouldn't write gay fiction. This "chick" enjoys reading it. I think women often have a better understanding of why other women like this genre. That may differ from what some men appreciate in it.
The basic idea of the story is wonderful, but I feel that you could have done more with it. Give more background to the characters and the setting. Describe Sinclair's life more as well as Chance. Lengthen it and add more details. But after all of that it was still a great story
I think it came out really well. Nice, and clear following a basic story line that is near, and dear to many hearts with the errotic twist.
Having said that well there was just one thing... some of it seemed a bit rushed. I would have liked to have met the prince in the story before the night of the ball. There would have been no harm in draging to story out a little more... give us more time as readers to connect with these characters you've created.
Speaking from a females standpoint... I love gay porn in almost all of its forms. So I know there must be others out there like me... I think male on male love is errotic, and supremly sexy.
Look forward to reading more from you.
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There are simply no other words to describe it. You're a phenomenal author, and this is by far the best I've ever seen. Keep writing!
What a delightfully thoughtful, sweet, but still hot and sexy twist on a classic fairy tale!
(I'd like to see a bit of action between the two fairy godfathers, though.)
Well done!
A VERY fun, sweet twist on the tale. i loved the ring. I was just glad he wasn't going to go around trying the dildo onto all the young men in the kingdom lol....very good story. hope sin can make the lives of slaves better in the kingdom!
I want to hear more and sin and chance and what ever happened to lord evram and his sons did they die