by CharlieL
While the dialogue seemed a little stilted and artificial, and there were several grammatical errors (plus one instance where the older sis called the younger sis by the older sister's name), the sex was nevertheless hot, and once I got past the other stuff I found it pretty damned exciting. Trash? Possibly. Unreadable? Not.
I too was a virgin at age 18 and like Marge asked my sister to explain it all to me. I had no idea at the time she was bi (in fact, at that time I had not idea what 'bi' was all about)so she jumped right into my education.
There were many scenes in this story that were exactly the same as what I went through with my sister and they get me hot all over again reading about them here.
I hope there is a sequel to this story