All Comments on 'Sister-in-Law Slow Burn Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great start

Great start...can't waitto read more. I hope this stays the course and doesn't get weird but stays with typical suburban forbidden fruit issues.

don87654don87654almost 18 years ago
Great reading!

Great introduction. Definitely needs more....much more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
wow!

A 'conservative semi-dominant slut' who loves her man.

;)

swtolebillswtolebillover 16 years ago
A geat start

It was great, as far as it went, but you left us waiting to hear about the actual union between the two. You left us knowing it was inevitable.

Djmac1031Djmac1031over 2 years ago

Excellent intro. You've never written more?

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