All Comments on 'Sisterly Seduction'

i am a bi sexual male and loved every word of what Maggie has written. Please write more

Lwsbian incest is what I like best - Please write more chpt, including watersports love games between the sisters.

Simply great, one the best on here.

I am confused. Is the clitoris special? LOL U repeated several times that,'the clit is designed to give a Woman Orgasmic pleasure.' I knew this, but repeating this info lessens its import. After a while it became annoying, Maggie! Truthfully. This was the best story I've yet read on this site, tho. In spite of that repetitious phrase, Lady. U have, yet again, excelled in StoryTelling of an Erotic Nature. A+ for combining Incest and Lesbianism in your story, too! My, My, My. Woo Hoo! U GO girl. snap

I got about half way down the first page and gave up.

Ok, I got that they were Greek, eating Greek olives, Greek cheese, Greek pita bread, etc, we did not need to be reminded with every item mentioned for their meal.

There was too much lazy assumption and there was way too little going on that made it easy to predict the plot. In fact there was no chance what so ever that the sisters were not going to get together; I like a story where the author fights to make it seem like there is a chance that sanity will break out and siblings don't get together, but that was never an option in this case.

Neither of the protagonists had any character; I have seen stories on here where the author obviously got bored and forgot the names of his/her players and chose new names that carried on to the end of the story - I don't know if that happened here (I suspect not) but as far as I could see for the little I did read you could have swapped the sisters names over and I certainly would not have noticed, they were that bland and insipid.

I glanced at the other reviews to see if there was something I'd missed and noticed that they were all gushing over this story; having had a look at the last page I've seen nothing that would cause me to rethink my view.

Like the story outline, but found it lacking; it could have been so much better.

What really spoilt it for me was the dialogue between sisters; who talks like that? Very unrealistic.