All Comments on 'Sisters Ch. 02'

Please don't bother to post until your story is ready to get somewhere... First two posts easily should have been one and even just the first part of one submission.

That said, your story has potential, just try not to chop it up into such small chunks that don't allow the reader to get involved...

Or I could post what I like, when I like? The reason I posted them seperately was because Chapter 2 wasn't written until after I had posted Chapter 1. Just like Chapter 3 is being written now and will be posted when it's done. If you don't like my posts, that's fine. But please don't leave comments like that just because they don't match YOUR tastes.