by Faolin23
In my opinion you left the reader hanging as much as Malora. Too bad the stories set in the Old Republic are better than the game that inspired them.
I hope you're planning to continue this one. As a SWTOR player, I like it a lot! More with Zash would be fun, too. Just saying. :) 5 out of 5.
a good story needs to be longer you left the reader hanging. please keep writing would like to read the next part !
It was a bit of an anti climax. I hope you add more to this. You made Malora up to be a cock loving whore but nothing really happened between them. If you made this a bit longer and continued the story it would have been a 5 out of 5.
Jeeez i must have done this quest wrong in SWTOR , i didnt realize i could bang her... i gave him the brain instead