All Comments on 'Six Month Sentence For One Mistake'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great First Story

Brilliant, original slant to story, good prose style, humorous and horny.Could do with being a bit longer with more sexual detail.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Hmmm another whore story, and same old premise

Told fairly well of a woman who fucks for her employment, otherwise called a whore. She takes bareback sex thus placing herself and her spouse at risk, to bad she isnt intelligent. Such blackmail could be used very effectively to insure she had enough money to never need to work again. Now that would have been a good variation on an old theme.......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Nice

I like that she did not get into the sex the whole time. That at the end she was mad. So many start off where a woman has secret disires that suddenly awaken as they are used roughly by strangers. Not quite reality. Good story!!

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