All Comments on 'Slave for a Day - The Perfect Gift'

Nothing erotic here. Just a 12 year old writer trying to get peoples attention.

I loved the descriptions of their hot bodies!

Didn't see that coming! Really good story! Can't wait to see what the wife gets for her BD? Maybe taken by boys of the same college? Keep writing.........

when the wife said we will do the night at a latter date.

This story just begs for more chapters.

Very nicely done!

Plenty of good descriptive action in this nifty little tale! Would love to make it a foursome,and I wouldn't even require the $1,500.

...when I got to him spanking her (one or two mild swats I could have overlooked) and forcing his fingers into her ass.

I'm not into either

BDSM (even when light -- do not get the yen to spank or be spanked),

nor anal. I've read Literotica for so many years I've gotten somewhat used to putting up with it in non-anal stories.

But two things I'm not into, coming right together -- well, I'm out of here.

Rest of story was well-told and interesting.

Paul in Oklahoma