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by gwrit59

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I liked it

I would like to see more. Good idea for a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good tale but needs some proof-reading

"I can't bare it!" should be "I can't bear it!". One instance of "where" when you mean "were". A few more syntax problems. But the concept is well done.

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