by SecretPirateWench
SPW,
very nice work great story line and well written first submission (loved the virgin angle) anxiously await ch.03
I found this story very good indeed, although you should be more careful looking for those pesky typos - they can mark a good story down; French kissing, with an upper-case F, for instance, would have made this 5, rather than 4 *s.
Nice writing - keep going!