All Comments on 'Slave to a Couple Ch. 02'

by SecretPirateWench

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I really like this story. Super hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice

I found this story very good indeed, although you should be more careful looking for those pesky typos - they can mark a good story down; French kissing, with an upper-case F, for instance, would have made this 5, rather than 4 *s.

Nice writing - keep going!

glorialamuseglorialamuseover 13 years ago
Welcome

SPW,

very nice work great story line and well written first submission (loved the virgin angle) anxiously await ch.03

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