All Comments on 'Slave to Love Ch. 04'

This story is turning out to really capture how much we keep our feelings inside so we dont hurt even though somone is there wanting to give us love. I cant wait to see how you develope this storie I have developed so much care for your characters strangly enough especially damen. As angles said there is more to him that you are only getting a glimps of. Looking forward to the next instalment

It always amazes me how you are able to capture such emotions and make them into erotic stories. Your writing can take you places!

Thanks for taking the time comment on this story. I just reread it myself because i'm working on the end of chapter six and the begining of chapter 7, so i decided to sorta go back and make sure i have it all right in my head. Gods, what an intense chapter. One of the things i love to portray so much is emotion and love in all relationships. Anyone can write a quick meaningless stroke story, but i think what really makes erotica erotic is the meaning, feeling and intensity behind all the actions.

It means a whole helluva lot to me that you guys write feedback and comments to me, it keeps me writing and reminds me that other people are as in love with my characters as I am. This particular story has many many more chapters in the future, so you guys just keep your eyes peeled. Chapter five is already done, just need to clean it up and post it! :grins and hugs all:

Thanks again folks!

Nikki

Wonderful story so far, I'm really enjoying how it's progressing. I almost wish I hadn't read it until you've posted more, because this cliffhanger is horrible! >.> Poor Eko, I can't wait to see what happens between him and Daman and Angel..keep up the lovely work, hope to see more soon!

Fabulous! I am a huge fan of your stories, and this one is by far my favorite now! I only wish there were more chapters to read, these cliffhangers are killing me!

Sorry it took me so long to check back. Had some troubles. But I loved this awesome chapter. It brought tears to my eyes, and I hate to cry. LOL...I'm going onto the next chapter. Expectantly...

my heart just about broke for Eko and Angel lord !that was some hot deep stuff i feel bad for them both but they love and hate the predicament they are in i plain love it.well done again

love it