All Comments on 'Slave's Messy Room'

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estragonestragonover 13 years ago
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A tired story line. Poorly written.

onefantasyonefantasyover 13 years agoAuthor
Not in school

I came here to write out my fantasies, not to get graded by an old man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
never understood that whole submissive thing

like the t-shift says its better to die on your feet then live on your knees....

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
loved it

Simple story but wonderfully written can't wait to read more!!!

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