All Comments on 'Sleeping Bags'

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MR. GibsonMR. Gibsonabout 20 years ago
good erotic story

I liked your good erotic story but I wished it was a little longer. I wanna hear more pleaz!

GirlWatchinGirlWatchinabout 20 years ago
Great story, but to short

I enjoyed your story, but think more details would help the intimate scenes. Hope you plan on continuing with more chapters. What happens during the rest of their ride? what happens when they get home? Etc.

popeye219popeye219about 20 years ago
A very good start

Need to be longer and lets us know what happen on the rest of ther trip and when they got home

sexmatesexmateabout 20 years ago
Please continue!

Please finish it on the second round! Would be a 100 if their was some finality with the trip and when they got home.

Thanks for writing!

sexmate

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
True story of love

I loved your story but would like to hear more--maybe mom will get involved? Thnx again for your time writing this--Doug

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Awesome

Most natural and most realstic/probable setting.

Bil PotterBil Potterabout 20 years ago
Wonderful

What a great story, I hope you continue. And a great picture also.

Bil

Parker SundayParker Sundayalmost 20 years ago
Great story

Loved it, looking forward to part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
So So

The title tells this readers thoughts.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
100%

your stories are always top class and sexy as hell

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great!

You are an excellent writter. I could not stop masturbating while reading this story.

don87654don87654over 15 years ago
Making Richard a Grandpa

Very erotic. I hope for a continuation where Karen gets pregged by her daddy....

hotustyhotustyover 13 years ago
giving deep love.

very nice storie even better daughter all she needs know is a long hard and deep fucking to make her daddys lil bitch.thanks -hotusty-EMAIL llessur4fun@yahoo.com

twistedjoe37twistedjoe37about 12 years ago
Excellent work

Great descriptions, realistic set up, very good delivery. Makes me want to climb in a sleeping bag with someone.

skip2951skip2951about 12 years ago
hot

what can i say another one of your gems......you know how to get a guy excited...more

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Not my dad, but my uncle.

My uncle Bruan and I were hiking the Appalachian trail. My tent got damaged when I fell and two poles cracked. We had to share his very small tent. By the end of the night he was spooning me. I woke up to a nice thick cock poking me in the ass. My pussy got so wet. I reached down, slid off my panties and eased back onto his dick. God it felt so fucking good as it slipped inside. He woke up as I was pushed about halfway down onto him. He grabbed my hips and sunk all the way in. I lost my virginity in the middle of the woods to my uncle. For the next few years we always had a couple of trips a year. Then I went off to college. I think I will call uncle Brisn and see if I can come stay with him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Wow! I think Anon's story got me as hot as the story!! Picturing one of my cousins sliding her tight pussy down on my hard cock while Im sleeping! :)

RegginufRegginufalmost 3 years ago

Wow I absolutely loved it. This is a very plausible and realistic story. One of the best I have ever read.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Makes no sense at all. You seem to forget that they are in their own individual sleeping bags

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