All Comments on 'Sleeping With The Enemy'

It was a decent read but need an editor.

Keep up the good work.

At least that part was funny

I enjoyed this story. As a professional writer, I am usually very sensitive to spelling and grammar problems, but nothing in this story was very much of a problem. Just ignore those with too much negative to say. I will look forward to your next story. I also like your user name. It creates some very visual images.

Good story and I like the way way the The german officer was forceful but didn`t really hurt her, he could have just raped and beat her. I like strong alpha males who take what they want but also have a bit of a heart...i.e. he felt guilty the next day and he does have feelings for her. Another chapter would be GREAT!!!

You can write, girl. Do some more

I do hope that there are some more chapters to this piece....if there is ......wonderful begining.

For a first submission I thought this story was terrific. Intriguing plot and good flow from beginning to end. I definitely think there should be more chapters to this, or at least more stories from you. Great job writing and please continue to write and submit more. Thanks.

Tony

Perfect writing, plot and characters.

Great story, I enjeoyed it a lot. But to make it more authentic, make sure to have the names right. Better name him Von Kassel instead of Von Kassle, sounds/looks more like German - though you would pronounce it the same in English, your spelling looks weird to my German eyes ;-) And John isn't the best name for a Greek boy.

Write more, you're fantastic!

this has a lot of potential, great work

very good

It could have been a great series. I'd love to read more like this.