All Comments on 'Slightly, Once Ch. 01'

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rjm2rjm2almost 13 years ago
I like it

Super story, not rushed, and a good flow. Awesome.

LolitaXXXLolitaXXXover 12 years ago
MMMMMMM...

Love the slow teasing strokes, making her really feel the cock that's fucking her! MMMMMMMMM!!! Nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Super

We have all been there -our first sexual experience - as a teenager and having no clue what to do. this is a sweetly told story of a first love. Wonderful!

wjthermanwjthermanover 12 years ago
A cut FAR above the rest!

Outstanding story, one of the best-written pieces I have EVER read! Can't wait to read the rest of the series as I've just discovered it!

humminbeanhumminbeanover 12 years ago
Beautiful!

The shy, slightly inept guy certainly looks familiar. A charming story!

hotjavaguyhotjavaguyover 11 years ago
So like I remember

So many things in common with my first time ... Very real.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
beautiful

You couldn't have written a more realistic depiction of two kids experiencing first love and first sex. After reading so many in-your-ace sex stories here it was great to find one so gentle and well written. Thank you.

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