All Comments on 'Slightly, Once Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
beautiful

You couldn't have written a more realistic depiction of two kids experiencing first love and first sex. After reading so many in-your-ace sex stories here it was great to find one so gentle and well written. Thank you.

hotjavaguyhotjavaguyover 11 years ago
So like I remember

So many things in common with my first time ... Very real.

humminbeanhumminbeanalmost 13 years ago
Beautiful!

The shy, slightly inept guy certainly looks familiar. A charming story!

wjthermanwjthermanalmost 13 years ago
A cut FAR above the rest!

Outstanding story, one of the best-written pieces I have EVER read! Can't wait to read the rest of the series as I've just discovered it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Super

We have all been there -our first sexual experience - as a teenager and having no clue what to do. this is a sweetly told story of a first love. Wonderful!

LolitaXXXLolitaXXXalmost 13 years ago
MMMMMMM...

Love the slow teasing strokes, making her really feel the cock that's fucking her! MMMMMMMMM!!! Nicely done!

rjm2rjm2almost 13 years ago
I like it

Super story, not rushed, and a good flow. Awesome.

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