All Comments on 'Slightly, Once Ch. 07'

I don't know about your other story you got rotten feedback for, and while I think these 2 need do need to, maybe have some unhappy times, I wouldn't like it if you ended up splitting them up, or have one of them have an affair. I think it was natural for Kim to push Dave away at first when she was almost raped, it's also natural that they'd both fantasize about someone else, but I would hope they were mature enough and secure enough with their love to talk about it.

That brought some well taken tension to the story. I'm ashamed to say it now, thirty years later, but when a similar situation came up with my first real girlfriend in college, I gave in to temptation (we weren't head-over-heels in love, it wasn't her roomate, and we didn't go all the way, but I was still an asshole, I know). I'm just lucky she either never found out or forgave me.

My only pathetic defense is that I was like the protagonist in the story. No dates, and a complete nerd in high school and the idea that two girls might actually be interested in me kind of made my brain and libido short circuit.

I sincerely apologize to both my sweet someones at DSU and to all wronged women everywhere. Some of us really do learn better, eventually.

While don't want to have people go back to thinking I'm an asshole again, I would like to disagree with another post saying they should talk this out. Since he didn't really do anything with Cindy, talking about it would just hurt his girlfriend, and would make her worry and be suspicious for the rest of their college life, at least. Sometimes the shrinks are wrong. Too much honesty about feelings (no, not guilty actions), can wreck a good relationship.

Decent series, though I wonder in the earlier chapters why the only people in the stories were her parents. What about his parents, their friends, even teachers. A lot if focus on sex and little on the actual story.