All Comments on 'Sliver'

I can see where you get you other story ideas from. Open marriages, Swinging, Sharing Marriages. Which I guess you are or have been in these situations in the past. I understand now and won't read your stories again.

Very nice read, magmaman! Wasn't sure where it was going, but truly enjoyed the story. Your writing skill is pretty good, felt like an average joe wrote it, and like i said, it was a good read. is there a part two? ;-)

You won't read my stories any more?

Oh GOD! I am crushed, I will not know what to do if you don't.

I guess I will go sit in my chair and pout now.

Snif*

LoL

MGM

Short, but nicely done. You got the characters quick enough and well enough to allow the reader to see them.

I'm not sure it should go all the way. It might be more fun as a tease than leading to all out sex.. The "just touch, looking" though, is too damn tempting to pass up though, and would be a fun read especially if Danny doesn't get off yet Caroline did.

when will me stop thinking with their dicks and realise the whores are just doing what they want and will always do it no matter what the man thinks.....they are all sluts