All Comments on 'Slow Dance'

seriously turned me on !! mmmmm ZB

verrry good

Very Hot..........the thoughtfulness and emotion...awesome

I think an unselfish story of giving can be so beautiful and you captured the emotions so well. Wonderful story. Now I want to go read your other stories. - Chip

Yummmmmmy story. You have managed to touch on most of my senses which is what any story should reach to achieve. You conveyed easily that by her pleasuring him, she reached her own pleasure- both in her mind (which is where is always starts) which resulted in the fire deep in her core. Well done Nookie

I've read them all, and all are very stimulating. Please continue to write for you've a wonderful talent.

Cajun-man

In flight over CO ... my circualation was great! The story made for a very interesting flight. You paint a very vivid picture with your writings darlin. This is the third time altitude did not effect things... you are now part of the 'mile high club'. Thank you Nookie ... Scott38

You certainly have a talent in eliciting "sensory notes" from your reader. I can see the romance peeking out from behind the "animal lust". <whew>

I really loved this. I enjoy giving to my partner as well.