All Comments on 'Slumber Party Scavenger Hunt Ch. 01'

by VBallNatalie182

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alwaysupforu2004alwaysupforu2004over 13 years ago
great setup

makes me want more now! I want to see Kimmie's adventures. And Jenna and Taylor too! Hot stuff... hope Natalie joins in with them all. Keep em cumming!

eroticorgasmeroticorgasmover 13 years ago
Erotic...

and looking forward to many more stories from you --

phillyphan6phillyphan6over 13 years ago

Who will win? My guess is Kimmy...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Tantalizing build-up!

I just started it and I'm barely through the first few paragraphs and you've already got me panting! Your descriptions of these girls' bodies and attitudes is a total tease. You set up the scene fantastically! We'll see how far into the story I can make it without exploding Meanwhile I think it's safe to say it's pretty good. . .

lex8508lex8508over 12 years ago

Good story so far, has me pretty flustered and breathing a little difficult. All I can think of when reading htis is the youngest daughter of the butcher in my town who is 18 and a senior this year and wondering if her and her friends do this.. Definitely getting this 26 year old virgin guy's mind going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Very well written and great start to hopefully a longer story

mke394mke394about 11 years ago
I hope....

Hi... You got my attention and have me at 'attention'.... Hope you will continue this story....

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