All Comments on 'Slut at the Supermarket'

Would have been good, but I dislike the humiliation component. The vile language is an absolute turn-off.

This was very entertaining and nothing Ive read before! Sexy time! Please make more ^^

Cute story, I like it very much! I want to read more :3

I'm on the other side of the fence on language, the dirtier and nastier the better, I think. Everyone has a different fantasy, if someone doesn't agree with your language they should stop reading. That's just my opinion, and my opinion of your story is a resounding, job well done! I can't wait for part 2.