All Comments on 'Smile for Me Ch. 02'

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NightpleasureNightpleasurealmost 13 years ago

damn you ended that too soon. i was really enjoying this chapter.

bredrebredrealmost 13 years ago
Very Good

I was just getting into it when it ended...please update soon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
*****

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Hmm...

Is it just me or does 'smirking warmly' sound like an oxymoron. Definitely a 5 despite the over use of of the smirk :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
that was hot!!

yup...hot!

*****

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
ERY Good!!!

Love the story so far! Hot! Keep up the good writing!!!! P.S. my fetish mirrors yours lol

MadameblaqueMadameblaqueabout 12 years ago

Great story. Please finish!!!

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