All Comments on 'Smithson Ch. 02: The Family'

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenalmost 11 years ago
Spectacular

I don't think I was expecting a second chapter, much less that it could be even better than the first. Fantastic work.

Of course now... With this chapter ending as it did, you know we're going to want More, don't you? xD

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
again

Once again, your writing is good and fervent,

but your understanding of blacksmithing is kinda embarrassing.

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I became a widower last year. so apologies for some sad starts to my future stories. Not sure how much I got in me to keep writing, but this latest one at least finally came together after a couple of months of pecking at it. enjoy.

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