by SophiaY
A perfect, delicious, petite evocation of a wonderful scene and vivid characters. The language for the sights and feelings and every little action and whimper is just right.
a thousand words to describe this drivel would begin with "terrible" and end with "shit".
How anyone can delude themselves into thinking they are a writer just because they are queer is beyond the pale! The two are not intertwined. Go knit a shawl or something if you have to keep your fingers busy.
I'm not sure what story that one twit was reading but it obviously wasn't yours. I thought "Snapshots #01" was marvelous.
Wow! It's rare that one would find IR lesbian stories and even more rare for it to be as good as this. There were no fetishisms or stereotypes...just colorful blending and mating. I loved it! Thank you. Keep up the great work! :-)