All Comments on 'Snow'

quite good.

...with no background to the "story" makes for the deja-vu of grading freshmen rhetoric papers. Waste of my time.

There must be some married woman that the author would like to spend the weekend fucking, and have skiing as amusement after he fulfilled his desires.

Not too bad of a thought, thanks.

quite fucking shit.

The story had all the sexual excitement of watching a field of snow. The writing didn't inspire any interest in either character as a person. Maybe some background about their lives apart would have me care if her SU really tried to have her not come to his hot tub. Maybe if we knew about the other woman he expected in just three hours and his fear of having them meet there would have been some tension in the story.

You didn't give us any of that.