All Comments on 'Soccer or Succor Ch. 04'

Remember that their sons are still on the team.

Those are the best two words in the long, long, long story.

Good job again!

I think most of the bad reviews are from pissed-off Soccer Moms with repressed sexual urges!

I thought you took some of the advice you recieved, and used it your OWN way, and made a really good series with a GOOD ending!

Enjoyed the way you made it highly sexual and yet added the emotional! Sex without emotion is good!, but its like masturbation. Without a personal connection, its just a very satisfying release! Purely PHYSICAL, thanks for making it more than that!

Good Job!

....how do I join the club?

Theresa

I know I'm a bit late on this, but I just read all 4

chapters and I must say that I thought it was

pretty good. I don't know if I would've added the pregnency

angle @ the end, that just seemed unneccessary to me.

And, while it was an interesting change of pace the way

you kept switching narrators for each story, sometimes

telling the same story from different POV's, for the

future I think I'd prefer if you stick with one specific

storytelling. Pick one lead and tell it from their POV,

or maybe just write every story in the 3rd person.

And, regarding future stories, I think I'd like to

see a continuation to this series. There's plenty of

possible chapters. The most obvious is those 3 new

seniors that were mentioned @ the end of Chapter 4.

You can have each women pick one plot to seduce him.

The next 3 chapters can each be about one seduction.

Then the next chapter after that can be how the women

start sharing the boys with the others. Maybe have

another big orgy.

Another possible series idea is lets see what's gone

one with these women's sons. Maybe, while these women

were screwing the other boys, one or more of their sons

were actually getting lucky with some other older women.

Maybe other mothers on the team, teachers, or even the

mothers of Aaron & Tommy. Wouldn't that be an interesting

twist?

Just a thought.

I wish I was young again and played Soccer. This was a great story line and I wish that it was not over. But Cheer up people, maybe there will be more????

Bob

Very little detail when it came to the sex scenes. It was all "he stuck it there for this long at this frequency", in no way was it erotic.

Too bad only one MILF got knocked up. I wish she had helped the boys get some of her fiends pregnant.

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