All Comments on 'Sold Ch. 01'

I really don't care either.

I would like to read more about the husband selling his bitch wife. She needs to be used and used some more.

Like the old saying "rode hard and put away wet" is what she needs.

Have him take the money that he gets from selling her whore ass and take a good vacation by himself.

I think he should make her sell herself the next time, and have her use the money for household expense, tell her if she wants any money that's the only way she can get it....Rich

Sorry but this isn't about a loving husband or wife this is BDSM. If a wife would want or allow this they really should not be married, same with the husband. I guess you are writing a serial story so I guess you have all ready written the other chapters. But in this first chapter you haven't really explained why they are in this sex club. Also you haven't really explained why the husband is selling his wife, making her a whore and him a pimp, and the fact that the wife just accepts it. I understand people have fantasies about control and some probably have them about being sold to someone else other than their partner. But making them into a whore isn't that a bit extreme?

No threat this time to our voting and a possible sequel? Again, old man, I remind you that this is not your forte. Your talent is ...limited. I am but one vote, as you are not an American. Go back to your speciality. This is not it. I think this is the most generic feedback I have ever given you. I only do so as anyone who will view your plethora of work will surmise, what little talent you have is misplaced. If garbage is garbage...then you are king. Don Mclellan

Not worth reading, just plain old garbage.

I liked it and hope you continue on. To everyone else with negative feedback, if you don't like it, don't read it.

NOPE. DONT WASTE OUR TIME ON PART TWO OR THREE. SORRY THIS COULD HAVE BEEN A REAL WINNER. THE TITLE WAS TITILLATING BUT THE BOPY OF STORY WAS PURE TRASH

but only if you sell her for good and with a movie of her performing the whole night and present her a nice divorce without the right seeing the children, because he don't need a whore at home for his children. I mean who can handle a bitch like her during 3 month , acting like a spoilt brat just because he won't have a swinging marriage.

Loved it!! more please.

Congratulations. It's not very often that a person can write a story that is the most disgusting piece of garbage on this site.

the Ct. Yankee

Congratulations. It's not very often that a person can write a story that is the most disgusting piece of garbage on this site.

the Ct. Yankee

Well that has set the Cat amongst the pigeons!

I will leave the few negatives in. I like them because they really show up the moles who read but never write!

At least I seem to have achieved an objective!

I have got readers to vote, the current rate is one voter to ten readers, a vast improvement!

Why so?

If you do not give me serious feedback how in Gods name can I write stories that please YOU?

With feedback 9 to 1 positive I will continue with this Loving Wife Story, because that is what she thought she was!!!

The end is NOT nice!!

Ronclarkeson

Continue please, I am eager to see what happens next

stop writing

Nothing much wrong with the story, perhaps the wrong section? One thing turns someone on, whereas another is offended. You can't please all the people all the time, so even if one reader is happy, you have succeeded!

This is the last story he posted here. Thank goodness.

This isn't a bad story, just a bit tame and genteel, given the title.

I like this. It contains situations I have never considered, so thank you for that. I think I would like to know these people better before they hurry to the club, and so empathize with them as they "play" there.

Loved the story, it is very much like a dream that I had. In my dream my husband sells me to a group and I find myself having sex of all kinds with this gang. So good.

loved your story wish it was longer thanks

How can the cuck sell his whore. Who would buy used trash anyway.

Loved it. Please continue

Really enjoyed the story.are you going to write a part 2. Reminds me of the time I gave my ex to some friends