by Wonderstorm
The premise is quirky...like the long standing nightmare of being naked and not being able to find a bathroom!! But your writing is good and editing almost without error. Waiting for the next installment.
You've taken a bizarre premise, and made it work fantastically. It somehow manages to keep the realistic reaction to the odd situation intact, which makes the ridiculous still seem arousing. I'm quite impressed, and very much looking forward to the next segment!