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Click here"Bailey I've been summons to parent duty."
2. "Izzy it's Sara of course you know this but call me when you're up to talking they didn't mean to be that way."
3. "Iz, I'm sorry I crossed the line today and I should not have brought up he who should not be named but I do know that you can't stay mad at me forever. But on to other news I name you a date with one of my bother frat brothers. Bye" Jessica end the message with that.
"Oh, Bailey mommy is going to kill your auntie Jessica."
4. " Siento si hice daño a sus sentimientos no era a propósito por favor perdóneme. Te amo. Y cuando usted preparado para decirnos lo que pasó ese verano deberemos escucharle hasta el final aquí. Hasta entonces esperaremos. Besos. (I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings it wasn't on purpose please forgive me. I love you. And when you ready to tell us what happened that summer we'll be here to hear you out. Until then we'll wait. Kisses.)
"Bailey if I didn't love this girl so much I would be mad for this Spanish that she's always forcing down my throat. But at least she has thought us Spanish. Ok now that that's over lets go watch the Batman Returns."
Falling asleep with Bailey curled up at the end of the bed by the middle of the move Batman ended up watching her.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 11 years agoNothing the main character does makes any type of sense.
She has the perfect dude...she gets pregnant and with out any just cause she breaks his heart and kills his child oh and let's not forget...she's complaining she can't find someone??? Yeah I'm good Off this story unless it magically explains why any of that occured.
khandyss12over 11 years agoPut an editor on speedial please. It was hard to follow with missing punctuations and grammatical errors. There were times when you got confused with the characters of Jessica, Sara and the other friend.
I sense that it can be an awesome story..,
Anonymousover 11 years ago"I'm ready to go were's the waiter so I can pay the bill it is my turn right?" Sara said
I'm not wishing to be a spelling, grammar and punctuation cop, but this line has so many glaring errors that it is getting the award for best dialogue line of the year. There are many others in this story equally as amusing.
This would make a good play though. Grab a friend and read the dialogue out loud exactly as written.
ariesgirlover 11 years agoYup...she definitely was selfish. I understand it's her body and she wasn't ready for a baby but she was dead wrong. How did she know how he would've felt about her being pregnant, she didn't even give him a say in it. She was a coward and still is. Her conscious is eating her up is why she feels the way she does now.
She need to grow a pair and at least tell him why she dumped him and ran. At least it will ease some of the guilt.
emj417over 11 years agohe may forgive her, but she better have a damn good excuse on why she aborted his child. maybe there's insanity in her family or a heredity medical problem that she didn't want the baby to suffer from---still should have told him. right now i kinda hope he has moved on. he is going to insist on an answer to her leaving him; why take another chance on her. not feeling the way she handled things and then to treat a cat like its' her 'baby'.
