All Comments on 'Someone Will Die'

I want them to wake up, maybe in the same bed, panic, and go to the hospital telling this outrageous tale of what Mike had done to them. The police investigate and there is no basement below the garage. Their health is fine. But they wind up telling the world about their betrayal of Mike and he uses it as grounds for a clean divorce. He gaslights them.

Direct and to the point. They were both warned several times that negative actions result In dire consequences. Too bad they didn’t listen and stop their negative actions.

While most over the top stories like this one are more annoying than clever, this was a bit fun.

Yep, over the top, but fun.

Killing the prostitute (by infecting her to use as a trap) was kinda sad though. She didn't deserve to die...

Story ruined by the desperate need to lessen impact and appease unknown audience. There are times when violence is the appropriate answer. Extreme prejudice is clearly called for in this story.

I agree with other commenter, the poor hooker didn't deserve to die. Especially a painful death. The other two did though. I respect hookers more than cheaters. I wish that we would use the scarlett A now a days.

Great story with beautiful ending for cheating pair.

*666

Wonderfully brutal!!!!

The best ending for any cheating spouse and lover... A wonderful storyline... I loved it... Revenge is best served with death... 5 Stars...

I can understand killing the cheaters, but the unnecessary cruelty turned the story to shit.

Also, he apparently lied about a huge part of his life, which does not beget trust. Even if he couldn't reveal everything, he could easily have found ways to tell her without revealing too much. If he had the amount of trust and loyalty in her that he professed she should have had for him, then telling her the whole truth would have also worked, after all, he trusted her, right?

Both, ultimately, bad people, but he's by far the bigger monster and worse person.

I did like the story but did agree with one other's comment. The guy lied to his wife the whole time about hiimself. She had no idea her husband was a killer, Truth or Consequences? He never gave her a chance to Fully Know him and his lies. Is it the pot calling the kettle black? I don't know but I guess I didn't write the story.

Wow! I know the cuck crowd is going to murder you on this one. However, I feel that it was a stroke of brilliance, to have them do it to themselves. Burn in hell, bitch! 5 stars.

Wow.

Comparing the omission of your past to the lie of betrayal and disrespect as it were somehow the same? GTFOH.....

Beautiful. One of the best endings to a cheating is slut story seen on this site.

Too bad there aren't more writers finding creative ways to burn cheating sluts and assholes to the ground in ways that leaves them suffering till the very end.

Remind me not to piss you off then run across you in a dark alley or anywhere else for that matter ! Lol

And what did the Brazilian prostitute die for?

Abctoy and not_a_viking_honest grow up

it doesnt matter what he told her his job was her legs were open to everyone regardless

I loved it and they got what every cheaters deserve. Someone should write a series where cheaters get punished many times worse than society and judges dole out.

If only?!

rather dumb

Good story, clever plot, just remember, Ebola , unheard of until a few years ago, as was sars, mers and COVID 19, so plot line plausible, as for military assassination squads , who do you think kept the "red peril" at bay for forty years, but that's gekados.....

The small dick energy is strong. You have to be kidding me with this. What's the matter? Your incel support club failed to meet this week?

Sick.

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Top Shelf!

11/10!!!!!

More cheaters should end up like this, most lovers get off lightly. 5*

Sadistic crap disguised as prose.

You switch back and forth between POV (Point Of View). Some times I have back read to figure out what the current POV is. I liked the story but the POV thing was irritating. I'll give it a 4 instead of a 5.

A murderer is upset about his wife's loose morals, hilarious. /s

Quite over the top.

I was waiting for the twist that they were only knocked out and then outed to everyone as they had to seek medical treatment for a non existing problem

Reads like a storyline from a grade B movie.

Kind of over the top and beyond belief but he did warn them, lol.

"experience and treachery will overcome youth and inexperience every time." A great line.

So the poor prostitute was what, just a human sacrifice? The husband was a far worse person than his wife and friend. They didn’t kill a completely innocent person just to make a stupid Rube Goldberg plan work.