All Comments on 'Someone Will Die'

So the poor prostitute was what, just a human sacrifice? The husband was a far worse person than his wife and friend. They didn’t kill a completely innocent person just to make a stupid Rube Goldberg plan work.

"experience and treachery will overcome youth and inexperience every time." A great line.

Kind of over the top and beyond belief but he did warn them, lol.

Reads like a storyline from a grade B movie.

I was waiting for the twist that they were only knocked out and then outed to everyone as they had to seek medical treatment for a non existing problem

Quite over the top.

A murderer is upset about his wife's loose morals, hilarious. /s

You switch back and forth between POV (Point Of View). Some times I have back read to figure out what the current POV is. I liked the story but the POV thing was irritating. I'll give it a 4 instead of a 5.

Sadistic crap disguised as prose.

More cheaters should end up like this, most lovers get off lightly. 5*

[06.07.23]

Top Shelf!

11/10!!!!!

Sick.

The small dick energy is strong. You have to be kidding me with this. What's the matter? Your incel support club failed to meet this week?

Good story, clever plot, just remember, Ebola , unheard of until a few years ago, as was sars, mers and COVID 19, so plot line plausible, as for military assassination squads , who do you think kept the "red peril" at bay for forty years, but that's gekados.....

rather dumb

If only?!

I loved it and they got what every cheaters deserve. Someone should write a series where cheaters get punished many times worse than society and judges dole out.

Abctoy and not_a_viking_honest grow up

it doesnt matter what he told her his job was her legs were open to everyone regardless

And what did the Brazilian prostitute die for?

Remind me not to piss you off then run across you in a dark alley or anywhere else for that matter ! Lol

Beautiful. One of the best endings to a cheating is slut story seen on this site.

Too bad there aren't more writers finding creative ways to burn cheating sluts and assholes to the ground in ways that leaves them suffering till the very end.

Wow.

Comparing the omission of your past to the lie of betrayal and disrespect as it were somehow the same? GTFOH.....

Wow! I know the cuck crowd is going to murder you on this one. However, I feel that it was a stroke of brilliance, to have them do it to themselves. Burn in hell, bitch! 5 stars.

I did like the story but did agree with one other's comment. The guy lied to his wife the whole time about hiimself. She had no idea her husband was a killer, Truth or Consequences? He never gave her a chance to Fully Know him and his lies. Is it the pot calling the kettle black? I don't know but I guess I didn't write the story.

I can understand killing the cheaters, but the unnecessary cruelty turned the story to shit.

Also, he apparently lied about a huge part of his life, which does not beget trust. Even if he couldn't reveal everything, he could easily have found ways to tell her without revealing too much. If he had the amount of trust and loyalty in her that he professed she should have had for him, then telling her the whole truth would have also worked, after all, he trusted her, right?

Both, ultimately, bad people, but he's by far the bigger monster and worse person.

The best ending for any cheating spouse and lover... A wonderful storyline... I loved it... Revenge is best served with death... 5 Stars...

Wonderfully brutal!!!!

*666

Great story with beautiful ending for cheating pair.

I agree with other commenter, the poor hooker didn't deserve to die. Especially a painful death. The other two did though. I respect hookers more than cheaters. I wish that we would use the scarlett A now a days.

Story ruined by the desperate need to lessen impact and appease unknown audience. There are times when violence is the appropriate answer. Extreme prejudice is clearly called for in this story.

Yep, over the top, but fun.

Killing the prostitute (by infecting her to use as a trap) was kinda sad though. She didn't deserve to die...

While most over the top stories like this one are more annoying than clever, this was a bit fun.

Direct and to the point. They were both warned several times that negative actions result In dire consequences. Too bad they didn’t listen and stop their negative actions.

I want them to wake up, maybe in the same bed, panic, and go to the hospital telling this outrageous tale of what Mike had done to them. The police investigate and there is no basement below the garage. Their health is fine. But they wind up telling the world about their betrayal of Mike and he uses it as grounds for a clean divorce. He gaslights them.

One more time. They were warned after all. What did she expect?

Nothing like a final ending. Good enough for them. (In this unrealistic over the top story).

Having been in the “wrong corner “myself, these stories help tremendously

Thank you

is unnecessary. It's only in recent times that treason against the family has been treated in such frivolous way. Now we see what the result is in broken families, children raised by single mothers, higher crime rates, higher welfare rates, and lower educational achievement. All of these are consequences of adultery (and having children out of wedlock)

The disease was an interesting plot idea

Your name is fitting.

This may be at the pointy end of BTB, but it's fantasy.

Even so, any medical establishment that came across two otherwise perfectly healthy adults, lying together after a romp, paralyzed and in excruciating pain and didn't immediately put the highest level of safety in play are the most incompetent professionals on the planet.

As for exposing it to the public, the asshole and slut had their plans... They were on the moment he hit the ground. What... was asshole going to go get coffee at the airport lounge and fuck the waitress with the slut waiting at the table? No, their plans were to get to bed and try to fuck each other to death. And in that, they succeeded.

If by chance he had picked up a little other pussy, well, the 5 day incubation period would have burnt itself out pretty quickly among the low-life set where sex is just a pastime. Maybe someone innocent could get burnt, but with hubby knowing their plans, the chance of this going sideways is next to nothing.

BTW, that short fuse with the disease is the very reason this could never be a real thing. A virus needs to be able to travel in order to propagate. If it ever got a hold anywhere, seeing as there is no cure, the problem area would be cordoned off for 5 days so that everyone tainted could die, there would be a cleanup, and the virus or whatever would be dead and buried with all of it's victims. End of the road for that virus. Unless there is another, consistent source that kept reaching out to jump into humanity. You know, maybe like a strain of monkey that doesn't display symptoms, but that are so irresistible that different perverts just have to fuck them on a regular basis! Just saying... just an aside to the main thrust of my comment.

Any other excuse you can think of to disparage the action in this little tale?

The Cheaters Did not Know what to do ... As My Wife Said Once a Cheater always a Cheater .. I Sent Her Ex a Invitation to Our Wedding .. I just forgot to send it . Opps Me Bad

Pity there is no 6 on the voting score.

Great story. Thank you.

Should have come up with a way to just to paralyze them. Let them look at each other while you keep them alive for a dozen years. Killing is too quick.

No one says “... I [was a] member of a top secret elite team...” if they are on such a team.

And no one would knowingly risk bringing BFF into the US, even IF at that juncture it was spread only by bodily fluids. Now the incoming EMTs and other medical personnel are at risk of contracting it also; there are always needle sticks, and coughing and spitting. IF it was a was a well studied... no, I know it was for the sack of the story. I guess it’s like the people who bitch about the wrong calibre used in a pistol, or some non-sensical law procedure, or wrong year for a given model car. Having been loosely associated in the infectious disease field has ME going on about disease vectors used in a fiction story. So... never mind.

Other than the disease vector, this is still a weak story. 3-stars

Hell, if we go around killing all adulteresses, it's going to be a fucking lonely world!

After reading the comment from Anonymous 05/23/19, it occurs to me that the answer to his question becomes obvious once you accept the premise that she "ghost wrote" the story. ;)

If Mike killed her, how could she be narrating?

Far out bit too much

But liked punishment except hooker

3 stars

Cause she was a hooker?

This actually can be healthy. You can live vicariously through reading (or writing) this, without actually doing something you could go to jail for. It gives you a way to channel your anger...

Just a revenge fantasy, but a damned good one. What better revenge than to tell the cheaters exactly what you've done, and describe in excruciating detail what is going to happen to them. BFF would be a tough way to go, wouldn't it? If you're going to have a fantasy, make it a good one.

The Russians are doing it all the time with their chemical and bio weapons. Just look at the Brits they've killed lately.

by Anonymous

06/29/18

No killer squads, either............ anymore. At least not American Military.

That kind of work in now contracted out. Many times it is teams or individuals from former Eastern Bloc Nation. Or at least is was up to 10 years ago. I would imagine today it is a large mixture of different Ethnic teams and individuals involved.

GUESS AGAIN MR. NAIVE!

DON'T YOU REMEMBER OSAMA BIN LADEN AND THE NAVY SEALS?

They never intended to take him alive, why bother?

That is only what they admit to, lots more that they don't!

I have an answer about the hooker in Brazil. She wasn't infected with symptoms, she was a carrier. She gave it to Greg, our sad husband's best friend who, of course, passed it on to our wonderful, loving, faithful wife. Ahhh, the perfect love story. And they died happily ever after.

Fiction. All possibilities are available.

Five Stars

That kind of work in now contracted out. Many times it is teams or individuals from former Eastern Bloc Nation. Or at least is was up to 10 years ago. I would imagine today it is a large mixture of different Ethnic teams and individuals involved.

I thought paralysis was the final stage before death, that the burning pain, blindness and deafness came first?

Why do so many of these wives say they love their husbands' sweet love, but also sometimes like to just get fucked, but never think to ask their husbands to "just fuck" them?

special forces and cold blooded people don't talk too much

There's been many diseases used for this kind of work. The kill squads however- usually called "Sniper Teams"- are usually between 2 to 6 men depending on the mission. The private sector has them also- you can start with Vince Foster and work your way forward with all the dead bodies Hillary Clinton has left behind.

Great BTB story. Traitors must die!

When they are caught they are taken out and shot. Why is that ok but it's not ok to kill some one who personally betrays you? Would that I had the means and opportunities years ago. Thanks for the feel good story! Added it to my faves.

Even though I have belittled you, given away what is yours, lied to you, disrespected you, deliberately deceived you, and broken our vows.

Yeah right!

While I would never condone such treatment as death for adultery, it has historical precedence. It's harsh, but it is also emotionally satisfying from a sense of ultimate justice for wanton betrayal. Have to say as a fantasy story, I liked it!!!

I like a burned cheater but this was just stupid and badly written.

5's

having been in the navy 20 years and divorced twice because they cheated when I was overseas I used to fantasize about it. I used to think of them giving each other the clap or some other std. oh well, all's well when they end up in hell.

Even WITHOUT the offers to take her on the trips, doesn’t she think HE got lonely, too? Would she let that excuse HIM from getting some strange? And fucking his supposed FRIEND?!

“she was in denial that he would cheat on her,” – Why do they never think, “He’ll cheat WITH you, he’ll cheat ON you!”

“She couldn't very well enjoy it, if she knew that she'd broken Mike's heart by confessing her affair with Greg.” – She’s not SUPPOSED to DO it, let alone “enjoy” it!

And I agree with the criticisms of the person shifts. While the story was well-written enough that is was still fairly easy to follow, it made it harder than it needed to be.

I know it is just a story. Stories can convey universal truths. One is that at times a person can think that adultery is so terrible that to harm the one committing adultery it is ok to infect someone so as to infect the lover then spouse. That is real sick.

As someone who actually did have assignments to take out targets and one who has knowledge of others, fellow Marines, who did also. None of us could have managed 450. We would have been fucking crazy probably drooling. A person can take only so much of that kind of life and taking of life and it overcomes you. For 40 years I could not talk about it and now 50 years later I can put the message on a screen but not without turmoil in my stomach. Till recently I was under the terms of my discharge that I could not tell anyone of the circumstances of those trips.

I cannot understand many of the crazies on this site who have such emotions about adultery. It hurts like hell but it is not equal to kill someone for it. Yeh I can see the crime of passion situation but to plan it no way. Just put her out of your life.

But what kind of fucked up person is he to infect an innocent hooker and subject her to this horrible death.

Her life was screwed up enough being who she was....

they should know, they do know and still do. TK U MLJ LV NV

Hoorah!

No misspellings, no grammatical errors, no emotion, no feeling, no real imagination, and therefore, no real story.

very much. A happy ending is always appreciated and as always, nice guys finish last. Or at least those two "finished" before he did. And as for the dumbass who said that all Marines are demented and delusional fucks I will say this. When the shit begins to hit the oscillator it's these "demented" fucks that I want on either side of me. You can face it on your own, Youngfart. In your mind you will be in better company until the end. And so will I.

Thanks for the read.

The trouble with the HIV scenario below is that Greg has already proved he would fuck anyone alive wearing a skirt. He would probably infect innocent people before he found out the results. That's assuming he has a conscience. Good story I thought. A shame that BFF doesn't exist hahaha.

The whore arranged in Rio should have been a rampant STD carrier, including HIV positive. She should have met Greg as soon as he got there so that she could give him the diseases in bucket loads. Then when Greg returns he infects Jessica. Mike comes up with any number of excuses to stop having sex with Jessica, which she doesn't really mind since she's horse fucking Greg. Somehow Greg gets notified that the whore in Rio has died of AIDS, and he is instructed to get tested and to notify all sex partners, which he doesn't do. Then, due to his failure to respond, Greg's employer is notified that Greg may be HIV positive, and Mike tells him he must get tested. In later conversation, Mike just happens to mention to Jessica that Greg has been found to be HIV positive, and must notify all his sex partners, who then must notify all their sex partners. Jessica panics, but does not tell Mike she has been fucking Greg and may herself be HIV positive.

Mike suddenly announces that he is ready to have sex with Jessica, which she agrees to, rather than admit she has been fucking Greg. She simply hopes she is not HIV positive. Mike video tapes their preparation to have sex, giving Jessica every opportunity to warn him she may be HIV positive. Just before they are to have sex, Mike stops, then hands her the divorce papers, telling her, she knows why.

In the divorce Mike takes Jessica to the cleaners, warning her that if she contests the divorce he will have her prosecuted for attempting to knowingly pass HIV infection to him. Jessica leaves the marriage financially and physically wrecked. She and Greg continue to fuck since they have no one else, until one or both dies from Aids. Mike moves on to find a real woman to love and live out his life.

Less complicated and messy than the BFF disease scenario.

really great

he's such a pussy ass little man Gave you a5

pretty bad...

The hooker didn't deserve to die. And also, She's a hooker. what about the other customers she has. Do they deserve to die also.

Should be in humor.

But, that's what made it so GD enjoyable.

As you can tell by the rating I gave your story. The thing I liked is that this is one story where the husband, didn't say " was so turned on watching them fuck " he did something about it, in one of the most unusual ways. For the whore and his suppose to be friend, I say to bad, they got what they deserved. again loved this, your story.

Yes, this story was definitely over the top, but it was still enjoyable. As long as the cheaters lose and the non-cheaters win, I'm happy. Don't condone the killing but not to broken up about it. They were so disrespectful. Felt sorry for the hooker that was sacrificed...that was bad. Should have figured a way to save her. Thanks for the story.

24 years in the Corps and I never once got to off a tango with an unknown disease. Damn, now I feel cheated! Well play, game set and match. Mercy is for the deserving and wasted on the cheaters.

MorganDeWolfe

There is literally nothing wrong with killing people that betray you.

but till now I had not seen it to this degree.

A little extreme but they were warned. I like to re-read the old BTB tales as it makes me feel all warm inside. The cheaters get theirs and I'm happy.

I'm also quite insane don't you know.

While extremely derogatory, your meaning is unclear. I'm getting on in years, and as yet I haven't experienced the psychological delusions you described. Can you hold out any hope for me? I was only on active duty for four years; and for two of those years I was in schools on Navy and Air Force bases being trained in advanced electronics. I'm hoping that because I was only stationed at an actual Marine base for two years; and then was able to be hired as an electronic engineer for a medical device manufacturer, that I might escape the ravages of dementia you allude to.

The Fantasy was a fun one for anyone who knows how to hate.... The author says he does not condone murder but he certainly likes to write about snuff. Since I am very ancient, I find that I was brought up in a culture where this could come under the heading of justifiable homicide.

are always the best. TK U MLJ LV NV

then our good Mike, also must have murdered the hooker in Brazil as well? Not very nice of him.

please write a sequel write maybe her response as a ghost her watching her husband does she feel guilty or not?

Is GOOD -

To ASSume that every nice guy in the world is a doormat is beyond foolish - almost every human (minus the Saints) has a limit or a button that when pushed causes a violent reaction , often irrational. When someone is nice enough to tell you what that button is - you are an ass to challenge fate by pushing it and get what you deserve.

He gave them both every chance to live right up to simply deciding to end the affair - he is right they did it to themselves - the innocent hooker was more than a bit unfair I agree LOL

Thanks for the offering.

"A Few Good Men!" And the rest of them are psychopathic poseurs trying to live out their delusions of having overcome teen-age rage and inadequacy. And sadly, as they repeatedly tell us, there are no ex-Marines: It's a lifetime affliction.

Tsik Tseks is the disease a guy gets from infected Chinese prostitutes (females are carriers, but have no reaction)! Makes a large sore on penis (even if only cunnilingus happened) and fever and pain. Most Western doctors recommend immediate penile amputation. Most Asian doctors think that is extreme and unnecessary...after a week, the dick will fall off anyway!

THAT would be a more appropriate revenge (at least for Greg!).

4*

More ........

Five stars - six if they were available.

Death The great equalizer

I just want to expound a little

Both asshole and slut were properly warned what would happen. They did not listen.

Lesson learned.

Don't cheat with your husband's best friend.

Someone will die.

OH YEAH

...most whores in Mexico and South America were forced into the role. Usually after they had been kidnapped and repeatedly raped. In their cultures it makes them unmarriable. And no, they don't break up marriages because wives are also unmarriable as they are no longer virgins. Only incredibly rich women can pull another husband. It is considered a sign of virility if the man has many women on his chain, though. Love the double standards...

So, basically, what you are saying is some poor girl who was kidnapped, raped, and forced into a life of prostitution deserved to die a horrible death. Wow. You really are a good person, TechRaider!

i liked it, as far as the whore getting killed. doesnt bother me a bit. im sure all whores have broken up at least a few marriages. they are only after money anyway.

... being a whore is worthy of painful death? He injected an innocent woman, insofar as the prostitute had done him no harm, to infect and kill the cheaters.

Personally, I think his wife cheating on him was a pretty good 'reward' for being a murdering assassin. But that is just me..