All Comments on 'Something Borrowed, Something Blue'

i really hate when idiot writers post a second chapter to a series and give it a different title. on sites like this ALL chapters of a series HAVE to have the SAME TITLE you just number them or use the sub title to tell what order to read them in. no GOOD writer is going to expect the readers to go looking for the previous chapters a GOOD writer will do it properly. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND DO IT RIGHT OR NOT AT ALL. NOW DELETE THIS CHAPTER AND RETITLE IT AND ALWAYS USE YOUR HEAD AND A GOOD EDITOR BEFORE P[OSTING.

...ignorant readers don't get the turn of a phrase to establish the order of a series. "Lighten up, Francis!"

As far as the story went, I found it difficult to believe Lisa would re-friend Gary, & not Emily.

Marvin

I, too dislike ignorant readers. MPQM, you did alright!

It did seem unusual that Gary & Lisa would rekindle their

relationship in such short order. Still a 5-er