All Comments on 'Something More'

great story

A+ story you've written here, very nice.

This story is good enough to make a straight man jealous of a pair of fictional lesbian characters.

The prose is just great as a love story, let alone the girl on girl imagery.

This story was beautifully written by someone who has felt the beauty of a relationship growing into the most intimate of feelings, Thank you for sharing your feelings

This was such a great story--now let's have the rest of it.

Working on it. ;-)

That was a amazing storie. Very intense in some parts. Could have been longer. Say 5 pages, other than that. It was good.

wonderful story! thank you. please continue writing, you have a great style.

This is pretty damn awesome! I hope to see more!

Please write more. I will be reading it when you do.

Thanks for the great story! I enjoy romantic stories that have that "first-time innocence" to them with believable characters. Again, great story.

~MCS

That was so cute and sweet! Definitely of a higher quality than most of the stories on this site. Plus, let's face it, I'm just a sucker for romance. Keep writing, you have a lot of talent. :)

Breath takingly romantic yet equally erotic

Now let's have Part 2 as you promised. :) ~ L

I love your story! Gentle, funny love story with just enough sex. Thank you for sharing.

Well. Honestly I started working on part 2 but became sidetracked by another project. I'm really excited about this one because its a lot more detailed with an amazing storyline. I will be posting it here soon. Look for it: It will be titled Lost and Found. :)

I Pursued Through Friendship For 19 Months One

Divorced Mom. She's So Beautiful. Finaly The Time

Came To Make The Ultimate Move.

YES, It Was her 1st Lesbian Love Making. Yes,

We Continued "Our" Friendship. Even Became

Secretly Engaged, And Plan To Go Public & Marry.

THANK YOU, For Such A Lovely Written Lesbian

Love Story. Part 2 Be Nice.

But First I'll Read Your Newest Submission.

Thank you for such a wonderful story ,so beautifully written!

Beatifully written, moving, and steamingly HOT.

Thanks for the experience.

So well written, I forgot about the writing and got into the story.

If you would like, try one of mine:

http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/93948

Please don't let this story become like so many other good stories on this site. Please continue it.

Please continue with this story I just love it!

i know people have been asking for a 2nd chapter, but the story is absolutely wonderful the way it is - thank you for sharing your talent.

you brought two beautiful characters to life

Love this story...