All Comments on 'Something Wild This Way Comes'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Good job!

Is nicely set up for a 'Part 2' - where they go out to a bar with her dressed in her new outfit. Perhaps push the public sex boundary a little more...? In any event, good story telling job.

rightbankrightbankabout 8 years ago
what happens in Amsterdam

comes home with you!

he needs to listen more closely to what she is telling him.

tazz317tazz317about 8 years ago
SOMEONE PARAPHRASES THE WITCHES SCENE

and then lives it, TK U MLJ LV NV

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