All Comments on 'Sometimes the Good Guy Wins'

Don't know the point if there was one, but I loved the story.

You do, do a good job on these.

Nice story. Wish things worked this way more often!

Thanks for the story. I enjoyed reading it. Good writing syle.

And that was one hell of a story. Love great characters, and this story has great characters! Hated to see it end, but a great ending. The reader can fill in the rest!

A good story full of old-fashioned (but good) values.

I loved it.

Thanks,

Norman D

A GREAT story. Everything about your stories is always good. THANK YOU

I enjoyed your story, loved how everything finally clicked for all parties,,keep up the good writing

Great read. Well developed and very realistic. A real pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing!

This is truly one of your best stories. I imagine a follow-up is in order. I hope it keeps going for a while....

good but i thought the way things were going that donna and nick would stay together or that he would find she was his daughter and she would move in with his sister but this was a good end also

It was a good ending, not a romantic one, but a very good one. Your stories are getting better and better

Great story but would have preferred a much more juicy end. I thought it ended too abruptly.

A great read. Well done.

As an aside, being from near Roanoke, I can't help but wonder about that TV babe. Hmmmm...

That was a great story. I know there are guys out there like the one in this story but they are very rare these days.

I enjoyed it immensly!

I thought it would end with Nick and Donna together.

Thanks for writing!

Out standing story. Sounded like you have done that before and were just relating it from memory. down to earth. Thanks

Thanks for the great read.

Wonderful. I really enjoy reading your stories.

Boyd

I especially like the plain-spoken tone, it really conveys the character. I was casting the movie in my mind and hearing the country music on the soundtrack while reading this one :-). Best, Ken

Erotic, credible, and a good read. Well done!

and just overall very enjoyable. Thanks for a excellent story.

Best story I've read for a long while. Literal, earthy and erotic! Can't beat this combination. Congratulations!

Very enjoyable read.

A very nice, sweet story. Thanks.

Is there more coming

....reading another story but knew I had this one in the well. Always an intriguing read.

. . and had to see for myself. Very nice! A story with heart.

In the end it was very realistic and he has another stopover to include in his schedule. Guaranteeing the day to day is very important.... Whether it be food on their table and a roof over their heads, or moments of pleasure for all concerned.

The reaction that something more special should have happened is normal, but this is a very realistic story and the truth is that the two girls need a future and he can not supply it except for monthly visits to that neck of the woods. Loved the story...

Realistic story. Good sex. A true to life plot. Need I say more? I could only give it a five. Wish there was a six.

This story is in my opinion all about Americana. It reminds me of The classic novel by John Steinbeck, "The Grapes of Wrath." People helping people. No money exchanged, no greed, no I'm better than you are. Just human beings, doing their best with their lives and trying to help those around them. Thank you for your excellent story Scorpio 44a. By the way, what's the "a" for? RAG

Yeah, there was sex, and it was good sex. But overall it was a really great story!! I would definitely love to read more tales of "The Good Guy" - he's very sexy, funny, and honest :) Thanks for a great read!

This story is the model for how to write an engaging and erotic story. The construction, tone, style, flow, and characterizations are so well done that I thought it was damn near perfect. Thank you.

Nicely written, with believable people your readers can care about.

Many thanks.

As a former driver I started feeling homesick for the road, and it wasn't because of the women! I know Grand Island well, and have been stranded there myself. Good, well written, almost believable story. Very enjoyable. My only criticism is to edit it a bit more carefully. The grammatical errors detracted from it a bit. Jerry

I really like your stories of this type. The previous story although interesting was not the type you do best.

Thanks

The way erotica should be written...

This was a nearly perfect short. The characters were flushed well, it had a good start, a strong middle and a solid end. Plus, I love mom's throw away line at the end.

I admire your talent and like your writing, especially when your lead character(s) isn't/aren't being arrogant. This is a terrific example of your talent with likable characters.

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i was hopin shed go on the road with him..either way a happy ending tho

Well written, liked characters , great story , humerus ending.

I cant write ; so if i don't like a story I usually don't comment. If

Very well written, fun reading... I did not expect the ending, had feeling they would go on the road together...

You have a gift-stories about nice guys are very hard to write without ending up unbelievable and maudlin. Very enjoyable read-keep on writing please.

I have read all of your stories under the other Scorpio and now trying to read all of these, and they are all really good. There are very few good authors on here, but you are one of the best

I still was hoping to see a new chapter with resolution for Donna and Linda - we'll see lol

When Hank asks about buying the jacket there they answered yes BUT it wasn't. Got the stops mixed up.

Otherwise great tale.

Loved it. I have read the entire series twice now. Thank you.

Please write more stories.

mama's nose always knows when someone has no-no's.

Very smooth prose, sir. Completely readable and interesting even aside from the erotic content.

Chivalrous man, real world dangers and situations, legit insider trucking information, good pacing. Love it all. A bit more detail in the sex scenes would be nice though.

Title is not related, just a word to fill the spot that popped into my head. Weird word.

too bad the rest of the story died this was real good.

This is how I want the world to be! Goodness returns and lifts up all.

This is the first story of yours I have read. I liked your characters and found it a good read on a hot July day.

Really enjoyed this one!! A guy can just let his imagination loose and the fantasy keeps running!!

Great !

Thanks !

Why is if I find it difficult to sympathize with an itinerant Trucker, a self confessed Whore and a minimum wage Cashier? Oh I know because it's boring as Fuck 🤔🤔🤔🤔

I love trucking stories!