by Hank_Carey
Well I have to say that was definitely a very enjoyable story, I really hope you keep writing :).
Left me panting with my heart in my mouth. Hot and tender. What a combination!
Very nice story. You're a good writer, very visual and steady. Hot and sexy! Good job, sweetie :P
and beautiful and very well written. I loved it - and it read as very real and true. You should be proud.
I really loved this one. Erotic, sweet, sexy, tender...it makes me yearn. Nice work!
That was intense and extreme, and left me yearning for more! Beautifully written!