by Kinky_Guy25
Not bad writing. A few of the usual grammatical and spelling errors plus typos. My main criticism is that this story would more appropriately be labelled "group sex" rather than "loving wives." Another criticism is that this episode was really too short to develop the characters or pursue the themes. Since Chris enjoyed having his cock sucked by a man early in the chapter, we must assume he is bisexual so does he give as well as receive?