All Comments on 'Space Fucked'

Your story is Too short !....

The second part is already submitted. This is more of a chapter than the full story. But thank you for your input. :)

I liked the premise and it was a good start. Needs a little more charVter development and a fuller plot line. Personally I'm big on dialogue but that's a bias. But just to reiterate, things like who's the chief, why was it necessary for him to have sex in front of everyone (status, kink, some kind of demo thing or was it about acceptance of intimacy outside of their species).

There are just some holes that need filling. All in all good start.

tooooo short great start

Hope the next chapter is longer. Great start though. Keep it coming.

Good story!

Good story, too short.