All Comments on 'Spite Sex Ch. 01'

Most of your submissions are dated 01. Plus one in 03, so it's been years since we've read your words.

I came across the nude 'beach' places at the Austin Lakes when I visited Texas a few years ago. Currently, my novel 'April in Texas' has 6 chapters up, but I'm pissed at Lit because some certain thief stoled one of my stories and posted it - a line for line ripp off - as their own. My next chapter deals with Texas wine country from Austin to Fredericksburg.

Your story would have, IMO, benefitted by an introduction of the characters earlier on. Additionally some interaction / dialogue between the author and the main characters would have leant credibility to your claim that the story is true. The dialogue and scenes are too detailed for a third party observer.

But it's a fun read. I haven't been back to Texas, should I go?