All Comments on 'Spoils of War'

Good story very entertaining thanks for sharing.

His hips must hurt.

Please continue this work. Please please please. I would be willing to be a beta reader for you or do a chain story with you (where we switch off chapter to chapter) . I've actually been planning on writing a erotic novel with a very similar theme as this short story.

LOVE IT. I hope you write more.

I thought this story was fantastic. It's rare to see a female domination story where the woman dominates the man through brute force as opposed to manipulation, and I think it's a nice change of pace. I wish Alma could have gotten a bit more characterization, and the ending was bit intense for me, but I'll definitely keep reading.

Alma should have told him she was going to play house.

I love this story! It is awesome!!!! I look forward to reading more of it!!! Keep writing it! It is awesome!!

The Amazons killed every single child in Svens village? They summery executed all the villages children one by one. These wonderous amazon warriors killed every unarmed women and child without remorse and celebrated this as a victory? One could image them towering over a two year old delivering a death blow from a battle axe. True Evil for sure

Sorry dude, but after the Amazons killed everyone, I lost all appetite to read, going just a bit on just to see the unrealistic rate the main char adapts to having everyone dead and suddenly loving his captor.

Unnecessarily edgy and logically dissonant.

Beautifully Written Hot And Sexy,,, Yes!

Hallo HG!

Your story "Spoils of War" is brilliant, it's beautifully written bloody hot and sexy!

It seems that throughout history females that didn't grovel kneeling to the male... were persecuted, tortured and killed for the unforgivable sin of thinking for herself, and saying that is enough, no more!

Thank-You, 5-Stars and 5-Orgasms!

The Black Queen and Gay Kat.