All Comments on 'Spread Eagle'

I liked it, but...I felt like there wasn't enough DETAILS! I'm not a writer so I'm not judging, but I am a reader (obviously) and the advice that I can give you as a reader is that when somebody is reading they want to be taken into the story...like if they've experienced what was written first hand. (Specially when reading erotica, lol) I felt like you hadn't put enough details into the sex. But this was really good to be honest I like the idea of this story. You should continue this into a series. :)

Hi! I'm the author of this story and i like your feedback! However, i have another series that i am working on called Kelsey's Bucket LIst and the first chapter is up already and maybe you would enjoy that instead. Its a bit of dominance, anal, erotic couplings, exhibitionist/voyeristic, etc... it suits EVERYONES taste and thats just chapter one :) ;) enjoy reading more!