All Comments on 'Spring Break Ch. 03'

This is the first story in forever that I kept checking back to see if the next chapter was available, I couldn't wait! It is that good. I love the way it is developing slowly with more excitement to come.

I have to agree with the last comment. Your story just keeps getting hotter and hotter. Looking forward to the next chapter.

It's so rare to come across a writer who can tell a good story *and* bothers to get their English right as well.

This is excellent stuff, and I hope you continue to give us more.

It's wonderful to actually have character development in a story!

This is the best one of this series. I especially like how Melinda breaks in Carl, the 'rabbit'. It makes me cum every time I read it.

still don't know "The Invisible man's" name

DKP

I liked this chapter and gave it five stars along with a favorite point. To be honest, though, I didn't like it as much as the first two chapters. Something about Carl and his rabbit technique just didn't do anything for me. On to chapter four.