by HLD
And the fun just keeps rolling along. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
I liked this chapter and gave it five stars along with a favorite point. To be honest, though, I didn't like it as much as the first two chapters. Something about Carl and his rabbit technique just didn't do anything for me. On to chapter four.
This is the best one of this series. I especially like how Melinda breaks in Carl, the 'rabbit'. It makes me cum every time I read it.
It's wonderful to actually have character development in a story!
It's so rare to come across a writer who can tell a good story *and* bothers to get their English right as well.
This is excellent stuff, and I hope you continue to give us more.
I have to agree with the last comment. Your story just keeps getting hotter and hotter. Looking forward to the next chapter.
This is the first story in forever that I kept checking back to see if the next chapter was available, I couldn't wait! It is that good. I love the way it is developing slowly with more excitement to come.