by sirhugs
This was a delicious voyeuristic story that turned "live action" for the main character. You paint vivid pictures with your writings and tantalize the reader! Wonderful tale you have here, Sirhugs!
From what I have read of your stories (not many yet) - I will be reading them all. This was a very hot story and certainly moved very fast! I did notice (no biggie) that on page 1 she was a nubile female and she was a little more filled out and seemed older on page 2. Didn't diminish the story.