by Starman2345
tell your father and brother what kind of man you turn out to be.get off watching others fuck your woman.
You need to return to grade school English class and learn proper grammer. In far too many locations there are more ... than words of text; this just wasted bandwidth and kills the story for reading.
starman2345's stories are sexually explosive,this is high calibre erotic scene setting.He is simply the best.I defy anyone not to get highly aroused by his stories.Anyone who doesn't get it should stick their nose back in the trough,starman is feeding caviar to pigs.
Suck my cock u motherfucker then I’ll fuck ur mother in her asshole, wow, u suck it from her asshole then suck my cock a little, then I’ll fuck ur wife’s asshole, wow wow, fach fach, hehehe…then suck me again so that I can fuck ur daughter in her asshole, wow wow wow. In the meantime ur mouth smell 7 look like latrine, so ur mother, wife & daughter will shit on ur mouth. Most of the male Americans are like this.
Keep on writing. Great story for Yankees.
it's just a yarn.not to be taken as a great work.a good horny story to be enjoyed.if you do not like the content don't read.it gives you ample warning at the start.on this sight we are not looking for perfection just escapaism[probably wrong spelling]ia?but who cares?
Why do you people read these stories if you don't like them? You make grammar comments? What the hell is your problem? If you don't like it - leave it and go on to what you do want to read. Keep it up Starman - I loved it.
Of course I gave my own story 100! Ha! Firstly, I would like to thank all the support from the readers who take time out to write insightful and appreciative comments. It is you whom I write for. I don't get paid for this - your comments are payment enough for the hours I put into these works, so thank you for leaving them – I read every single one.
Now, for those who continue to make derisive and, basically, stupid comments, I have to say that if you really can't tell the difference between fantasy and reality and lambast my works as if they were actually happening: get a grip! You are yelling at a fictional character! It’d be funny if it weren’t so astounding. Oh, what the hell. It IS funny! Secondly, and most amazingly, why if you despise these stories so, have you read all four parts?
Anyway, thanks for reading. I do this for fun - mine and yours. Cheers, Starman.
More please!
Also, I would classify these as Exhibitionist/Voyeur stories, since the main part of the action seems to be the protagonist's peeping. And the second story wasn't "incest" related at all, thank goodness.
Please continue this series. Very hot indeed...
Dude this is one damn good serious so far. I've only read the first two and I loof forward to reading the final two
Holy shit, really really good story! It reminds me of fantasy I have with my wife.
That stori was foking great!!!! Tell Liegh that there's no place to go once you've had sex on couch in front of sleeping boyfriend.
Hope for another 10 chapters to this.Its solid and I like old men.My friend does too told him about this but he was at the dentist.
When he gets home he will hear about it.
The Dad should suck off Steve on the last day of work for a bit of oral revenge.
Take it all up our best stories.
Piece up GFunnk.
Your writing is very enticing for those who have cuckold tendencies. What a hot scene, Leigh getting into it with her bf right there on the couch. Very hot!